Marked Up
lackluster sales copy, solved.
edits + strategy delivered in 72 hours.
edits + strategy delivered in 72 hours.
Submit your sales page or
sales email sequence.
I’ll tell you exactly what’s not landing
and what to say instead.
You’ve got the offer.
You’ve written the words.
But something’s still… off.
Maybe people aren’t clicking.
Or they are, but they're not buying.
Maybe you’re stuck rewriting the same damn sentence for the fifth time,
hoping it finally makes sense (and dollars... Sorry, I couldn't help myself).
that shit
makes us all
crazy
Repudiandae
so here's the deal...
If your sales content isn’t converting, it’s not because your offer is bad.
It’s because you're not hitting the right emotional and strategic notes
for your audience to feel safe, seen, and ready to move.
'Cause your people are skeptical, over-stimulated, and allergic to formulaic sales strategies.
That’s what Marked Up is for.
Repudiandae
[beta perks] only $97
for the first 6 audits
50% OFF
Usually $197
here's how it works...
You send me one sales page or a sales email sequence (up to 5 emails)
You can submit via Google Docs or Notion, as well as send the link to your sales page if it's already designed.
I’ll do a sales copy edit in your doc and record a screen share video marking up your copy and explaining exactly what to shift, add, cut, or reframe so your audience sees the value and feels ready to buy.
So you get commentary on the sales psychology behind each change, insights into how your message lands visually and emotionally, and you understand the “why,” not just the “what,” so you can apply this across all future sales content.
72 hours later you'll get everything you need to tweak for better sales. Think of this as a sales messaging audit meets strategic creative direction.
You get high-touch, custom feedback for a fraction of what I usually charge for this level of strategy.
[beta perks] only $97
for the first 6 audits
50% OFF
Usually $197
Marked Up: A Sales Copy Audit
Full line-by-line markup of your sales copy (either a sales page or 3–5 sales emails) delivered in Google Docs or Notion
Track changes + rewrite suggestions to improve clarity, flow, and conversion
Comments explaining what’s missing, what’s over explained, or where you might lose people
Clear guidance on what to cut, reframe, or expand so your message actually resonates
Commentary on the sales psychology behind each change
Insights into how your message lands visually and emotionally
Explanations to help you understand the “why,” not just the “what,” so you can apply this across all future sales content
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so yeah, this is more than a sales messaging audit.
It’s a sales messaging tutorial
built around your own work.
built around your own work.
You’ll walk away with:
A deeper understanding of how to emotionally connect with your people so they feel ready to buy
Tools to improve your future content, not just fix this one page
Clear decision points so you stay in creative control of your message
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7 business days of text/audio support in Slack with 24 hour response time
Get your sales page or emails reviewed once you make changes
Get help with ideas if you feel stuck
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